ALL THE FEEEEEELLLLLLLSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!! I never thought I would like a story Orochimaru centric, but this just pulled at my heart strings! I always love a story where Naruto get's a mentor and one that calls out all the issues that they put in with either poor planning or just because they wanted a tortured hero. I find this story beautiful and I've love where you've taken the characters. I like it when I get to see a Naruto that's taken care of (He deserves all the love!) and the problems in his education. I would love to see more if you're ever inclined.
THIS!!!