Okay, so I finally got the time to read this! I love this verse, Mukuro is absolutely one of my favourites, so I'm glad to see how close he and Shion are! I have to admit to being a bit surprised - given Shion's personality, I almost thought she'd never trust someone as... broken as Mukuro, especially if he kept claiming to only want to take over her brother's body. But the way you set it up, I can kinda see it, though it'd probably take a lot more detail than given in this snippet. Still, really good, I really like how you used the neck being so vulnerable as proof of trust! Though, Mukuro shared Shion's bed? Do all the guardians sleep in a puppy pile or something? Or were Shion and Mukuro dating? Good luck with the main story!
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Date: 2017-09-01 07:06 pm (UTC)Though, Mukuro shared Shion's bed? Do all the guardians sleep in a puppy pile or something? Or were Shion and Mukuro dating? Good luck with the main story!